Typecasting: Riding the hell out of Kelso

I’m venturing into realism. This is a rough first draft of a story I banged out. The short version: it’s about a young man dealing with the loss of his grandfather, and more besides. It needs paring down, sharpening, but its a lump of clay I’m happy to continue sculpting. A revision by friends won’t be resisted either. I’ll post a typecast of draft II sometime in the future.

Kelso I.
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Kelso II.
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Kelso III.
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Kelso IV.
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