Omnipresent Tanka

NaPoWriMo #16

Omnipresent Tanka

When I am cremated
scatter the ash in the sea
then will I be beat
Beatific and everywhere
In all the drinking water.

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A tanka today. Classical Japanese poetry getting me out of a bind… not for the first time.

‘Frankly my Dear, I don’t give a damn’.

Fionn Coughlan-Wills.

Any thoughts?